So I have been trying to work on this competition in my free time while learning how to use Corona . My concept is trying to reimagine hudson yards rather than using the same buildings. A lot of what I am modeling is by using grasshopper

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  1. ronen says:

    There is no right or wrong in this challenge @tomahawks619 so keep going and stick to it :wink:

  2. StefanDimitrov says:

    Hello Fayad,

    You have done great job so far on this project! You can try to play a little bit with the background on this image. I think in that way the project site will “pop out” a little bit more and will be more persuasive.
    Keep on with the great reflections on the surfaces.
    Hope that will help.

    Bests.

    Stefan

  3. Flow says:

    Good job! I like most those “rainy” reflections. I agree with Stephan, adding some background will give to the image more intensity. I suggest to insert some darker buildings in the background but only in the lower part so you can play with contrast: background - dark and circular roof - bright.
    I have a question: it seems that the image has a general green tone. Is this your purpose? I think that a yellow/orange tone would be better for the contrast with blue. What do you think?

  4. tomahawks619 says:

    Hi Everybody,

    Here is the second image of the 3, the view as a commuter to the vessel . I was hesitant to post this since there is a lot of photoshopping and unresolved camera issues . I might try to populate more but I kinda do like the sparse population .

    I will try to start on the third one while finishing this and my first.

    Modeling : Grasshopper / 3d Max / Rhino

    Thoughts ?

  5. Flow says:

    Hi Fayad, I like It! Sincerely the only thing I would have not put in the scene is the write on the floor. I don’t know but it doesn’t seem as realistic as the other part of the scene and it cover a well texture floor. : )

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